Submission (#2730)

Simple Science

LostInProgres

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Investigation SCI-L1 III by LostInProgres

Submitted 3mos and 1w ago

Processed 3mos and 1w ago by Or'sol

Alter grimaced as he pulled yet another wilted plant from the soil surrounding the greenhouse. The once-vibrant foliage had begun to wither, their leaves curling and browning at the edges- a sign that the rising toxicity levels were taking a toll on the flora surrounding the greenhouse. He supposed they were lucky they managed to catch it in time, but if they didn’t act quickly, it was only a matter of time. Looking over at Watch, Blast, and Snap- three whelps who...

Investigation SCI-L1 III

LostInProgres

Alter +12
Word count = +8
Environment = +2
Lead Investigator ° ~2

Snap +10
Word count = +8
Environment = +2

Watch +10
Word count = +8
Environment = +2

Blast +10
Word count = +8
Environment = +2

Using research (mischief managed?) to add a fourth roll!
RP = 84
Base = 42
R+42

I'm a bit confused about this one being sent back? Watch, Blast, and Snap are all mentioned starting the second paragraph of the first section and are in dialogue for the next 600 words of the story- even diving the literature in sections of 200, they are all mentioned individually in all sections-

I've added a direct mention to Blast and Watch to one of the sections where it was distributed weirdly, but I can't find where Snap would need an extra name mention- if that is still needed with the edit, please specify which section /nm