Comments on LostInProgres's submission

Wayward Station Avatar
Could we ask for clarification on who is considered the "neighboring colony" in this submission? Additionally, Rust only has "rust-colored whelp" listed among their nicknames in the gallery piece, and anywhere they're only called "the whelp" is not being picked up, so at the moment they only count as being in 1 chunk. You can edit the gallery piece to update their nicknames!
LostInProgres Avatar
Like I said before- the "neighboring colony" is the adult dropping Rust off near the stream. "An adult tsabhua was there, cradling a small, rust-coloured whelp. As he watched, the adult set the whelp down on the riverbank and then walked away."

sorry about the nicknames- they weren't popping up as "mentions" for me at all, so I was a tad puzzled myself- added that nickname to his as suggested.